roxywriter1573

Oh my goodness, this was such a cute story. It made me tear up a bit because I'm kind of in that situation myself, except it didn't take many months, ...

Wow. Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I feel like I'm her. Like I'm the ugly girl. It almost made me cry to feel like what it is in her shoes ...

This was good, there's just a couple of things that I would like to point out. First, let the police oficcer ease into the information that her family has just ...

Oh my goodness that is AMAZING!! Brava brava! :) So much emotion and I could feel the way she felt. It was amazing :D Keep on Writing -Roxy

Okay, I like this piece. There's a lot of emotion and I could see how much this girl hates this guy. Good job. I would nitpic it but it's hard ...

Hm...i'm liking this already :D Then again, I'm a sucker for romantic stories so...we shall see. Haha. I felt like I was actually reading a book, although there were some ...

Oh my gosh. This is so sad. I'm so sorry. Sometimes I feel the same way, even though my dad is still here in my life. He's a workaholic and ...

Wow that was reaally good. Good job :D There's just a couple of things that i would change just to make the story a little better. here they are: Pitchblack ...

Okay, the whole idea behind the story is really cool and I can't wait for you to finish, but there are a couple of things that I noticed that you ...

Aww :( that's so sad. The poem was wonderful though. I loved it. Especially the ending. There were a couple mistakes but everyone before me has already pointed them out. ...

This was so amazing! I love love love romantic stories like this and i love this one soo much. But...(yes there is a but) it was just a little too ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :( I love this story even though it's sad. I'm a sucker for any kind of romantic comedy type story. I love how you started off with El

Wow. I can see why this was featured. You have a very good way of describing the characters and I could see what was going on. Very good job. I ...

Wow, this was really good :) I am very impressed with your work andi'd love to see more. At first, i thought that I would be a little annoyed my ...

Wow. That was really good :) I'm not say anything beyond that. Brava :D Keep on Writing -Roxy