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Ghost Child - Chapter Three This couldn’t be true! As much as I hated my “supposed” father, I was pretty sure he was a better Dad than the Grim Reaper. ...

that is really quite a nice poem. You might want to check how long your lines are though because it sounds a little off in some of the stanzas. Other ...

you're really good and you have potential :) i think, though, that you do have a couple puncuation errors all throughout the story which i just want to point out. ...

Ghost Child - Chapter Two I yawned and tumbled from bed. It had been almost two weeks or so since living in the Ballingdon Mansion. Somehow, I easily adjusted to ...

lovely poem, made me really think. You're really good and I like it a lot. You may have either dropped the sappiness sometimes or did it too much, but in ...

Really good and kind of deep if you think about it the right way. I really like it and I'm glad you wrote it, although I wish the poem was ...

this is really really really good :) i think you're trying to use "bigger" vocabulary too hard though. You can get the same effect from smaller vocabulary if you just ...

Its basically the same thing over and over again, but i do feel the depth of the poem and how you can really relate to it if you think about ...

Really good :) keep up the good work

Ghost Child - Chapter One Ding Dong! “Love, Mama will be right back.” She removed me from her lap and opened the front door. I heard gasping and stumbling footsteps. ...