rothwise

It happens every so often When artistic muse eludes And I take up writing poems To express my many moods Words are little pictures When you think about it deep ...

My mouth's agape with boredom My eyes are wet as glass Once again, as I so often am I'm sitting in my class My head is growing heavy, My eyelids ...

wow this is really good :) i just have one thing to tell you: in the third line of the first stanza, you might want to change it to "Has ...

Ghost Child - Chapter Seven The guard opened the door for a “times up” and saw Lex about to suck my blood and grabbed me. The guard rushed me from ...

aw this was really sweet :) that's such a good idea for a present! i loved the poem and you only had like a few minor errors that i'm not ...

you've pulled off the hysterics again! i was laughing all straight through this...you really need to make parody's of all the twilight books! those books suck so much. keep these ...

i was HARD. my favorite line is this one: "CHARLIE: [chuckles] You’ll be fine. Keep walking." just..the Keep Walking part just made me laugh for liek four minutes straight!! i ...

this is very well done! i totally get the deep meaning behind it, ya know? lol you have soooo many reviews it's so funny :) you have only minor mistakes, ...

Ghost Child - Chapter Six I rolled over. Where was I? Was it a dream? No, it wasn’t a dream. My eyes wrenched back. I was on a king sized ...

this...didn't make sense to me. i've read and critiqued a lot of poetry before. but this just made no sense. where does D-Day come into this? none of the lines ...

Hey there. couple of mistakes, i'll list them: the third and sixth stanza are only three lines. the rest are four...i would suggest adding another line to each of these. ...

couple of grammer mistakes, which i'll list for you: the last sentence in the first stanza...the first word shouldn't be "dont" but "aren't" the whole third stanza doesnt rhyme. i ...

Ghost Child - Chapter Five “I’m not sure sweet.” Lex admitted, “But I’m always here for you.” Without thinking, I reached up and kissed Lex. He, of course, kissed back ...

i think this is sweet :) it's really...deep and i totally understand it. You're, like, an amazing poet so totally keep writing!!! the ending, i couldn't stop laughing. Not from ...

Ghost Child - Chapter Four I turned off the faucet and stood, “Aright. In you go.” Heath was about to just step into the tub with his clothes on. I ...