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Gladius, Her cousin has his own kingdom to the north, Lotharia.

writingluver5, thank you, as always. :D write me, I also thought about changing that opening statement to "Love is..." because I figure you should always write with authority, yeah? Suggestion ...

Ah yes, Impa will be making her appearance. Fairly important character. But I didn't figure Impa would have her talents wasted picking out dresses. :wink: More to come later.

Thank Luna. :) I know it may seem like the end of it, but there will be more. I might actually have a real ending for this one. :o Miss ...

Wow. I loved it. It's very...authentic? I get visuals of things you don't even mention in the poem. Particularly dusty blue jeans? The last line is kind of dropped there ...

EDITED: I put the story into third person and would like to know if it sounds better this way. Jan 5th, 2007 “Powerful employer, eh?” Anton repeated. Ridge shook his ...

EDITED: I put the story in third person and I'd like to know if it sounds better this way or not. Jan. 5th, 2007 “You’re not human, are you?” Her ...

EDITED. Added some dialogue but something doesn't feel right about it. I'm always nervous about giving characters like this voice because I'm not always confident about playing the role of ...

Ach. I know. But I'm not sure how to punctuate poetry. Almost as if I have to be a musician to do so. I put some in there. Did the ...

Very rare to see it at all, by the looks of it. :shock:

I have NO idea how to pronounce Leighann. I didn't think about this! :) Leighann is actually pronounced LEE-ANN. It is just an awkward spelling. I didn't want to force ...

Yeah, I'll be putting a page break between the two parts. I'm terrible at "moving" characters and I try to avoid it when I can. But if I did put ...

Thanks everybody! I'm really pleased with what I have so far! Every one of you guy was a great help to this project of mine. The second section is now ...

I happened to notice that eveyone who has commented on this little piece thus far has been "male". So, with that fact in mind, I'd like to pose a question. ...

Being able to relate to the subject at hand would indeed help trigger a response from the reader and would thus, make it a better poem in their eyes. But ...