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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm afraid of Halloween.

    This poem was really good. I liked the last line a lot. The first line didn't have a "wow" factor for me and I think it's important for a poem ...

    Nov 11, 2008


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree