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Dai watched them solemnly, staring over the frothy tankard resting on the knotted wooden bar in front of him and wondering what the hell was going on. He slowly registered ...

i go through periods of reading loads, in the last two weeks i have read over 8000 pages. I need to get a life.

LOTR is without a doubt better, it has an entire language to learn as well as the same number of books on middle earth mythology as the actual trilogy. Potter ...

The boat that rocked has an amazing soundtrack, makes my day whenever i listen to it

as a song it is slightly odd that every line rhymes; it works much better as a poem in my opinion but then i don't know the accompanying tune. It's ...

Overall i thought it was very enjoyable but a little confusing, i didn't really understand exactly what was going on. Was she actually drowning? or drowning in a sea of ...

Personally i think you gave away too much if this is the first chapter of a novel/novella, also i think you have described too much. Like the review above said ...

I liked it but i thought it was a bit light, it's not a very good way of explaining the feeling i have about it but it's the best i ...

The thing that annoys me the most about twilight is the huge plot hole inconsistencies, Edward can stop himself from eating her but can't resist the temptation to have sex ...

ihave only read this chapter but im a little confused as to why she kills herself atg the end. There doesn't seem to be any real motive.

Thanks for tip about italics, ye it is a bit wierd, im thinking ill scrap this or maybe bulk it out into a proper short story, haven't decided yet but ...

I hate text talk so you have no idea how happpy i am to find a place like this. questions eh? Hate school,Dogs,Not sure what my favorite book is it ...

I liked it, not much to rip to shreds, but in my opinion Roy believes Justine's lost her memory a little too quickly, especially since she first says swear to ...

She'd always return to the same spot in the sweet, green grass that she had eventually started to create the slightest dirt path I don't feel this sentence really makes ...

This is something i randomly started writing last night, it's not finished and not sure what to make of it but any criticism and/or help would be appreciated. Hopefully enjoy. ...