romeyo

A friend wrote this. I really liked it, so I decided to come post it here. I hope I am not breaking any rules posting in someone else's work. I ...

Please, tell me what you think about this. A Wise man once told me, At about the age of three, “My dear, in all of life, with all you are ...

Nice work. Note though, The fourth line on the Third verse, where you wrote "She told my that my eyes"... It should have been "She told me that my eyes"... ...

One word - FUNNY.

I like the way you used the words... How you expressed everything. Good work. Just one thing though, I could put myself in your shoes, but I really could not ...

This makes me want to learn to sing. Must be a great song. Would av loved to hear it. Nice Job!

Hey..... I'm jealous. I want to learn French too. I always wanted to. How about we strike a deal. You teach me French and I... ehmm.... remain eternally grateful to ...

Knowing all these about you, I most definitely would love to read your posts. I like all i read above about you. You are definitely my kind of person (I ...

I made this poem only some few minutes to the post time, so i really did not have enough time to really work on it. Wanted to produce something raw, ...

It was sweet. I liked every part of it. It was scary that he had to die though. :-( You are good. Keep at it.

I push myself so hard, still seems like I don't have a clue, Though I see a clear path, Show me the way to move, With all I see around, ...

I think i like you.... who am i kidding? I loved everything about you, put up there. Cool! LOL

This is something I though about after seeing a clip in a certain movie. Silly me, these just came to mind and i thought to post it here. All critiques ...

Hey, i like the rhythm and the consistency of the poem. The aim of a poem is to paint the exact picture the writer is passing across. I think you ...

- Was bored on friday and i wrote this down. Decided to share it. Hope you like it. If not, just tell me whats wrong with it. I would really ...