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Re: Child of the Storm (Chapter One)
youre welcome emilyyy xx
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: The Heart is the passage
wow you are amazing why do you always beat me in english lessons!!!!!!
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: to be immortal & Rob's poem
To be immortal To be immortal, What would it mean?, To live and to love but to barely be seen, To dance amongst the roses, With the children and the ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: earthquake
Heyy, i really like this piece, i love the way you build a picture of the situation on our heads, the description is fantastic. the way in wich the main ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Forgotten Hope
Heyy, i really love this poem, partly because to me it dosen't make sense. i love the way that i have to read it a few times to understand all ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Harp *Edit*
Heyy, As a harp player i find this poem really touching, it is obviously written by someone who has experienced this situation. The way the atmosphere is created is very ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Child of the Storm (Chapter One)
heyy this is an excellent piece of writing, the way that in the first chapter you make the wind and rain seem as if they belong, and the way that ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: My friend Wacky.
aww this poem is amazziinngggg!!!!! it is written with some great ideas linking to the consience of the person it is directed to XxX
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: the angel nobody appreciated
the angel nobody appreciated, sat alone in the park, her wings torn by the abuse, and her soul torn by the insults, she isn't like the other girls, she finds ...
Jan 27, 2011
