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Thanks for the review dude, I'll make some changes. Yes I agree that there wasn't a very clear understanding of why he chose that particular night to kill himself. Earlier ...

CM Punk is the man! Probably one of the best heels in the WWE atm, then again i guess that's why you don't like him. ;)

This was a nice little story. But for god sake split up your paragraphs and speech; people will not want to read it if it just looks like a huge ...

yeh this was so good! I enjoyed reading that well done.

Yeh sorry if the spelling is a little off or anything guys. I started writing this on msn to a friend and I guess I must have forgot to check ...

I really enjoyed this piece bro. The flow and rhyme was good and the topic is something that all of us can relate too. Keep up the work dude.

I did quite enjoy this poem but i agree with Snoink above that a suicide poem is really rather cliche and usually follows a simple depressing pattern. All i have ...

I enjoyed that dude. ALl i can say really is i felt it could have done with a bit of a better build up to her stepping forward. But I ...

Thanks dude I have edited it now to your guidance. :D

Yeah this story was really really good and i honestly couldnt think of anything that i could tell you to make it any better than it already was. Keep it ...