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Re: Rejection
Rejection I took my place in the music room. And I sit there waiting for him. He comes in as usual. So casual and yet a look of indifference on ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: children
different but cool
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: i love you.
omg! that hit hard! i know what the boy is going through! my best frieend was beaten by her dad! so i can kinda touch base with the meaning of ...
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: Secrets Of The Goblin King Chapter Three (Part One)
Chapter Three “ What do you want Cory? I thought I told you to leave me alone!” “You did but I decided not to.” “Look I don’t want to go ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Something Out There
Your Story was sooo good!! Wow thats the only word i can think of right now!! Very very gooD!!
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: Tommy's Gift, Billy's Regret
it's just somthing i'm working on.... um again i'm new at this... enjoy it is now the editted version! thanks for all of those that whave read this short story... ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Secrets Of The Goblin King Chapter Two
CHAPTER TWO Evan woke with a start. She rolled over to shut off her alarm. She didn’t want to go to school today. What she didn’t want to do is ...
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Little Town Of Wyton
This is somthing new to me. I don't really know how to writ this kind of story. i'm just trying somthing new. I'v added a couple of things but i ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: The Murdered and The Murderer
i love this stanza A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, To steal a girl’s life Just to prove he can. It cut soo deep! it was really well ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Secrets Of The Goblin King Chapter one
this is chapter one of my novel and i need crits!! hope you enjoy! ------------------------------------------------ CHAPTER ONE “Hey, Evan, wait up!” Evan looked over her shoulder. Colleen, her be
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Cycle
This was very good! Very well put together! I loved it because it was a very deep poem! i enjoyed it alot! i love the last stanza! it's very... um... ...
Sep 28, 2007 -
Re: Who Am I
Wow!!! that was really good!!! i really describes my life!!! keep writing, when your bord! lol!
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: When A Dreamer Dies
that was good! but i still don't understand how the fairys get trapped in "The Cursed" dreams? thats all btu i'm looking forward to chapter 1!!!
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Secrets Of The Goblin King (Prologue)
sorry it took me soo long to edit!! i've been really busey! about the too much info thing... i don't know what to take out.. rather i can't deside what ...
Sep 21, 2007 -
Re: Calik
wow! that was really good! but i do have a couple of questions, why is this guy a murder, i mean what did he do? well i guess it was ...
Sep 21, 2007