ringettegirl

okay, so before you stat reading, i'm really sorry its been really long! i've forgotten to keep up with posting and everything! but this is the last of chapter one! ...

WOW! i really liked that! umm i'd say you did very very well! i'm not one to crit....but i loved the poem anyway! i hope you keep writing! :) Ringettegirl

i couldn't really understand who was talking...but halfway through i figured it out that the crutch was talking! It took me a while! anyways, i'm not really one to crit ...

Chapter One Today is Monday. The worst day of the week. Not only am I sore, but I also have three major presentations in German, French and Spanish. Ugh! I ...

But that’s just the life I’m living right now. Usually my life is pretty busy. I mean with all the traveling and “helping” people, I don’t normally have time to ...

Okay so, this is just the start. and please don't spare me anything! Critt the hell out of it! please. :) thanks Ringettegirl. [u]The Legacy, the Chase, My Life[/u] This ...

Chapter One “Elise! Elise come here! Oh please, I need your help.” Pauline cried from her dorm room down the hall. I sighed. All I wanted was a little time ...

Prologue Philip walked briskly down the corridor. Maney had only but minutes before informed him that the Lady of Lessex had come to call and was waiting for him in ...

I loved it!!!!! I love how I can really relate to that poem!!! Once again I loved it!!!!

your**** sorry!! i do that alot! :l

i liked you poem!! it totally described my life right about now! keep writing!! ~ringettegirl~ :p

I don't know if this should go in the historical fiction or in fantasy fiction.... if you could mention that in the crit's that would be great! thanks! and enjoy. ...

I loved it!! your talented at writing things like this! I LOVED it! you should keep writing this kind of stuff! But one thing: About who I am, Who I ...

i didn't ind it. but you need to put something more into it! like try and make it sound more like a poem, it doesn't flow. KEEP TRYING though!

wow!! thats good!! love it!! ttyl Ringettegirl!! (Jess)