ridersofdamar

that was really good. It was wierd how it switched from sounding like it was set in a mythological place, to being set in someting more modern and then back ...

teh new era lol

aww.... well not to bust yor buble or anything, but it is really hard to get things published, but good luck...

oh come on, is it that bad?and i know i made some mistakes

alex rider... it doesnt sound familiar, but i may have heard of one of the titles... i'll look them up. Edit: i looked it up and i have heard of ...

oh... right :P

thanks for the help, just one itsy bitsy problem... whats a fullstop?

:D CHAPTER 2!!!!!! WHERE'S CHAPTER 2?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

wow... that was good.... Rodax sort of reminds me of the Mandos from Starwars, i havent seen chapter two but ill keep my eye out.

The story is really good, bit hard to folow as the mens names are only shown at the end I think you might be talking about the first draft, the ...

wow, i didnt think it would be this popular, anywhay the third is coming out soon, thanks for the positive feedback!

ok, heres the link to the second part

I dont know what happened in the first one, but i was in a petter mood when i wrote the second one... the next one should be up soon, but ...

thanks, i did some revising, but i did miss some things. ill make sure to shange those, and for you're last comment in Familly Guy Peter refers to Meg as ...

ok, heres the new begining to the story, it is not finished and i will undoutably be adding more, but i wabted to see what people thought of what i ...