ridersofdamar

ok, hear me out and don't immediately assume that it will be the post apocalypse where zombies are coming out of no-where and the main charachter is a superhuman who ...

ok, i have the basic story line, its a deserted island somewhere in the tropics, a group of ten kids or so are in a plane that crashes the kids ...

teh new era lol

aww.... well not to bust yor buble or anything, but it is really hard to get things published, but good luck...

oh come on, is it that bad?and i know i made some mistakes

Heres part three sorry about all the dialoge, but i need to set up the story. enjoy. The city Tristan called home was built on the edge of the frozen ...

alex rider... it doesnt sound familiar, but i may have heard of one of the titles... i'll look them up. Edit: i looked it up and i have heard of ...

oh... right :P

thanks for the help, just one itsy bitsy problem... whats a fullstop?

:D CHAPTER 2!!!!!! WHERE'S CHAPTER 2?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

wow... that was good.... Rodax sort of reminds me of the Mandos from Starwars, i havent seen chapter two but ill keep my eye out.

The story is really good, bit hard to folow as the mens names are only shown at the end I think you might be talking about the first draft, the ...

wow, i didnt think it would be this popular, anywhay the third is coming out soon, thanks for the positive feedback!

ok, heres the link to the second part

This is part two, sorry it took so long. i hope it lives up to the first... Enjoy Tristan was aware of blood seeping through the interior of his boot. ...