ridersofdamar

Tristand didnt take out his sword the time. He drew two kunai, and said, "is there anyway i can get chakra quickly?" *sorry but this will decide my next post*

*haha, ive watched maybe twenty episodes, and ive never read you're not alone in being confused*

*haha, ive watched maybe twenty episodes, and ive never read*

*come on someone else post, dont let this die*

TRISTAN He was starting to get mad. THis lin knew everything he could do. He knew everything she could do. Everyone was low on chakra, except for him, who hadnt ...

Tristan jumped the wall just in time to catch Usiko as he flew back from one of Lin's punches. Usiko said something and then ran towards lin, making shadow clones ...

Name: Desmond Miles How were his parent killed: They were having dinner when a man burst in and tied everyone up. He burned Altair's parents alive while he watched. When ...

i will join, but i cant right now. Plz reserve me a spot. I will post either today or tomorow.

TRISTAN Suddenly the pain stopped and I heard a voice say, "Here restrain him before he goes crazy like all of the other ones." At the word 'restrain' I became ...

Tristan saw the bats and jumped. In less than half a second he was among them twirling his sword. Each slash brought down a bat. He danced in circles, jumping ...

Name: Tristan Gender: Male Village: Hidden Valley of the Leaf Rank: Chuunin Age: 16 Appearance: Average hight with a muscular build. He has dark hair that he keeps short. It ...

STEVEN This girl is deffinitely something else, I thought. Aloud, "Im Steven. What exactly is your gift? You say you saw the zombies breaking in, and you looked really out ...

for some reason this screams vampires, even though i am probably very far from the mark... i did catch that little bit about a "host" ^^

i am tired and it is late, so i didnt read the other crits. so forgive me for any spelling mistakes on my part or any repititions i might make. ...

i seem to be a little late in my review... but oh well. at first glance it seems oddly generic with the elves and the odd names and all, but ...