riddlemesphinx

Being written for a Creative Writing class-- any and all criticism welcome, please!! Fire-Safe I was never the kind of girl who listened well to her mother, a fact which ...

This is superbly written to be sure. I definitely could tell that the prologue is from a child's perspective, and your first sentence is a great hook. I think the ...

I want to (again) echo some of the sentiments from other posters here. I think I agree that once this is fleshed out, you have an excellent first three or ...