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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ellipsis

    Thank you for the advice, i will touch it up. Although i think i will keep expressionless in. I think it needs to be.

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Letters from the Front

    I am not quite sure what to make of it. I think for it to work, it needs to be longer: possibly one more letter. The actually concept of it, ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Your Soft Blue Eyes

    This is truly amazing

    Jun 17, 2010


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics