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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Back to the place

    I do like the idea of the sleep and dream bringing the idea back to cement. but the patterns are very akward. A couple of simple mistakes like "past" (i ...

    Apr 14, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Mostly a social commentary,but with a strong sense of self

    for F*** sakes, you make the rule, break it and won't obey it. i get it but how can i win you bitch about the effect and forget that you're ...

    Apr 14, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Midland Law

    I wrote this to fit a couple of time signatures and metres. the first section...(Ceasless---until rationale is to fit a 5/4 time signature, the rest can go with a lax ...

    Apr 14, 2009


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