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This is such a sad, and touching story. I really want to continue reading! Please write more!!!!! :) keep it up! i like the emotion you have in this story. ...

I'm liking the story :) but I also feel it was rushed and that there could be some dialog. The beginning bothered me a little bit because I feel that ...

I also really like the story itself, but the formatting for me seems a little different. It's probably just because I'm not used to it! :) keep it up hun! ...

I am really excited to see where this story is going! Right from the begining, I am in love with Lucas's character! I saw some errors in your grammar but ...

This is a really cute story! I wanna know how it ends. I like the fact that it's relatable, because I'm sure all of us have been there once in ...

So, I feel as though I need to start out by saying that you are an unbelieveable good writer. I can not write poetry to save my life, but you ...

You are a genius at capturing such detail and emotion in such a short story. I loved it's simplicity but also it's depth :) p.s. I'd love reviews on my ...

This is a very unique but great story! I don't think there is anything I can say that other people haven't already covered :) I would love to read more! ...

You need a little more detail. It seems like just the bare minimum of the story and you could do so much more with it! Keep it up! I can't ...