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This was a beautifully written story! Very well put together, and so cute. You made it seem like a scene right out of a movie. That is a compliment by ...

Absolutely wonderful! I will also question why he would attack Charlie, who is pregnant, rather than going after Logan who has stolen his girlfriends heart. It doesn't make much sense ...

So many twists and surprises! goodness! I agree with rumbly, I don't like Jesse. I can't quite put my finger on why, but I dont like him...I don't know if ...

I loved it! :) can't wait to read more! though I was wondering why only chapter 3 was in your portfolio....I would love to read the rest of it. :) ...

Beautiful job! You have been able to capture a realistic sense of emotion, something I envy you for :) The only thing I have to say about this is I ...

It's such a great story! Please write more...i can't wait to find out what comes next. You have such a unique yet fluent way of writing, which draws me into ...

OH NO!! He left! :( I'm glad you finally got another chapter up, I've been anxiously awaiting it :) This chapter is full of a lot of emotion and I ...

I like it :) I just think you need to take a second to read it over yourself, that always helps me. Only because there are easy-to-change errors that you're ...

Oh my goodness! so intense! I love this chapter. Really I do. Like Denia, I felt her pain...I don't think I would have been able to control myself if it ...

yay! chapter 10! :) I see you are keeping up the great work! There are a couple gramatical errors but I don't have time to drone on about them now, ...

Wow. I'm almost speechless but that would be an awful thing if I didn't tell you how much i love taboo. Please PM me when you put up more chapters! ...

So, I just finished reading all three chapters! I figured I wouldn't post something until the very end because I don't have any logistical info to talk about :) I ...

I will reiterate this again and again; you are a great writer! Keep this going, and it could go far. The only complaint I would have is that this is ...

Hun, you need to continue this story....and soon! I love it! I really can't wait to read more...I'm dieing actually ;) keep up the awesome work! I have so many ...

I love your writing style! I am dieing to read more....really I am. :) there is only one thing I have to "complain" about; it all happened so abruptly. This ...