rememberme

This poem is amazing. You don't read things like this everyday. You are a really talented writer. I love how discriptive and how your words flow so smoothly. It's very ...

curiosity got the best of me as it usualy dose i wonder "how come?" "Dose" It is spelled "Does" And how come what? and "what if?" What if what? all ...

I really like this. I dont think it has much to work on at all. the moral is pretty simple and easy to understand. Remember when you broke my heart? ...