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thanks so much guys! I wanted it to be funny for a poem, but have just a bit of a serious ending. I definitely didn't want it to be a ...

Bumping thread because a friend was so inspired by this story he drew me this.

Fantastic! My kind of poem. I feel like I should fill up this space to get points or whatever but I can't really comment much on something like this. I ...

Awesome. Totally get the feeling through it. Only: The traffic light does not both er me, Great work!

hahaha that would be funny, but I think they'd catch you. They can do an internet search for the text. They're really into that now. Plus what would you do ...

Aaah..."horseshoe", it's one word ...it's late :o I'm cutting this review short because it's a working day tomorrow!

yeah I'm just gonna pretend this never happened.

Another thing to consider is what he is doing at the moment. Your boyfriend is acceptable for a BGF if he is not A) performing open-heart surgery or B) crying ...

I think this is great!

She even wrote, “It’s not you, it’s me,” line . wrote the...line, maybe? Otherwise, good job! This story was emotional and interesting.

This is soo funny and clever. I recommend you double check for grammar and spelling though. There's a "furrious" where there should be "furious", "sewed" should be "sued", and stuff ...

Dude this is amazing, you beat out Family Guy, American Dad, etc. with this (no offense to people who like these shows)

Oh my Blake Griffin I love this. I'm scared of losing the contest now. AWESOME STORY--JUST--HILARIOUS

Hahaha I love it, please keep writing! This is funny and true.

I like it a lot, a lot of images in a short poem. One thing: Leaving wet foot prints as battle scaring . Scarring? Scars? Also footprints is usually one ...