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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Basketball Etiquette

    thanks so much guys! I wanted it to be funny for a poem, but have just a bit of a serious ending. I definitely didn't want it to be a ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Basketball Etiquette

    Basketball Etiquette Come to this court Concrete, or hard parquet Wooden slats shining, sleek Grab a ball, but wait a sec I need to talk to you before you rep ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: x (to delete

    Bumping thread because a friend was so inspired by this story he drew me this.

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: That's So Gay!

    Third stanza encapsulates what I think about the whole issue. Good work. I'm really into sports and in sports, this can be quite an issue. The SF Giants recorded an ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie

    This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie

    This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie

    This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: At Sea

    Hey! This starts out simply, but then it somehow descends into confusion and something a bit murky and hard to pin down as a feeling. I guess that represents diving ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Our Stalock

    Background info from Wikipedia: "Alexander Joseph Stalock (born July 28, 1987) is an American professional ice hockey goaltender currently playing for the San Jose Sharks of the National Hockey League

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Change

    Fantastic! My kind of poem. I feel like I should fill up this space to get points or whatever but I can't really comment much on something like this. I ...

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It is Quiet Here

    Awesome. Totally get the feeling through it. Only: The traffic light does not both er me, Great work!

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Fall!

    I agree with the idea of "more vibrant colors" but then in New England we are spoiled with awesomely colored autumns. Take more pictures and don't be afraid to experiment ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Pig Nap

    We reserve the right to deny pigs the right to become invisible. This is just one of those lines I fall in love with when I read them. I mean ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A New Discovery

    I agree with the above commenter, very good advice. Personally, I think this is a bit short and I was confused here: I was two-years-old when I was adopted ; ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Choice

    *Applause* now that that's out of the way, The Choice Is there anybody out there, who’ll hear my urgent words, Of a foolish species’ failure, to make a better world? ...

    Oct 12, 2011


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