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Re: Basketball Etiquette
thanks so much guys! I wanted it to be funny for a poem, but have just a bit of a serious ending. I definitely didn't want it to be a ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Basketball Etiquette
Basketball Etiquette Come to this court Concrete, or hard parquet Wooden slats shining, sleek Grab a ball, but wait a sec I need to talk to you before you rep ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: x (to delete
Bumping thread because a friend was so inspired by this story he drew me this.
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
Third stanza encapsulates what I think about the whole issue. Good work. I'm really into sports and in sports, this can be quite an issue. The SF Giants recorded an ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie
This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie
This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Rhinocheetah and Sharksaur Teach Us How To Boogie
This was written during Camp Nanowrimo this summer so it's supposed to be a novel, but it only got 7 pages long so I'm posting it here. I just wanted ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: At Sea
Hey! This starts out simply, but then it somehow descends into confusion and something a bit murky and hard to pin down as a feeling. I guess that represents diving ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Our Stalock
Background info from Wikipedia: "Alexander Joseph Stalock (born July 28, 1987) is an American professional ice hockey goaltender currently playing for the San Jose Sharks of the National Hockey League
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Change
Fantastic! My kind of poem. I feel like I should fill up this space to get points or whatever but I can't really comment much on something like this. I ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: It is Quiet Here
Awesome. Totally get the feeling through it. Only: The traffic light does not both er me, Great work!
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Fall!
I agree with the idea of "more vibrant colors" but then in New England we are spoiled with awesomely colored autumns. Take more pictures and don't be afraid to experiment ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Pig Nap
We reserve the right to deny pigs the right to become invisible. This is just one of those lines I fall in love with when I read them. I mean ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: A New Discovery
I agree with the above commenter, very good advice. Personally, I think this is a bit short and I was confused here: I was two-years-old when I was adopted ; ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Choice
*Applause* now that that's out of the way, The Choice Is there anybody out there, who’ll hear my urgent words, Of a foolish species’ failure, to make a better world? ...
Oct 12, 2011
