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Re: Dark Skies
I love this poem!! It's very dark and very sad, but it shows how confusing, chaotic, and dark life can be, where everything is mixing together and nothing seems to ...
Oct 7, 2015 -
Re: Sunset
WOW!!!!!! This is such a powerful and beautiful work of art, amazingly written and very emotionally connected. The love created between night and day is deep and beautiful and pure ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Delete
I loved the way you wrote this, using words like "avowed", "thus" and phrases like "silver tongue" and "golden words". Every single word flows so beautifully and keeps the reader ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Reflections
Beautifully written!! Such amazing metaphors and figurative language!! :) Every word is beautiful and sad and every single word rings true. It was smart of you to choose a topic ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Pause
Wow, this poem is amazing. It's the story of a lot of teenage girls, the rush, the passion, the fighting. This poem puts everything into a deeper, darker perspective, shows ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: The sea
Simple and short, but this poem hits the reader hard. It expresses the unpredictable ways of the sea and how a moment is all it takes to shatter a world. ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Not enough
This is such an amazing work of art!! Every word adds flavor to this magnificent poem. The meaning is so deep, but simply put in a way that connects with ...
Sep 24, 2015
