redrudderhouse

I'm sorry if this is a bit harsh, but I mean well. This is an online workshop after all. I agree with carbonCore. The imagery in the first stanza was ...

@Blue Africa: I guess you're right about the in-on confusion. And about the rhythm... I think I caught a dream while laying in the grass, a smile from the dandelions ...

At the Louvre He curls over my body and inspects my sin. Oh baby don’t worry, I can fix you. When we cut off your arms, you can be Venus ...

So this is actually kind of a personal memory- something I VERY rarely write. But here it is- I dunno if it fully makes sense to other people though. Well ...

Hello. I'm new to this community. This is my first entry. Thanks for reading :) ------------------------------ The Sea Contemplates the Moon There is no space between where your silver rim ...