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Hey there :) I'm going to be critiqueing your piece today - I quote your piece and change and add comments within it in bold . .3. Dom was walking ...

I didn't know whether this is in the right place, but it didn't fit anywhere else so I hope it's OK. This is one of my first pieces of writing. ...

Thank you very much Trikky and Sleeping Valor, you've both helped a lot. Any other ideas anyone ? :)

Hello, I've been wanting to start writing for awhile now, but maybe I am just scared... Why? I hear you ask... Well I'm really interested in Architecture for a future ...

Hey there :) I'm going to be doing you a review this morning. I hope you don't mind, but I do them in bold within a quote of your story. ...

Hey there, I'm going to be doing you a critique this morning. I hope you don't mind, but I do mine in bold in a quote. This makes it more ...

Hey there, I do my critique in bold in the quote for a more thorough look through stories etc. I woke to the the dead silence of the on-going night.

Wow, that was really helpful. This will sure come in handy when I write my story, thank you!

Hello there, I thought I would send you my review on this piece, but to be honest, I found almost NO mistakes. So I just thought I would send you ...

Hi, this is my Critique (it is in bold - so you can read it all through with my recommendations easily). Enjoy :) I didn't like clingy girls. I didn't ...

My critique is in Bold . Me. I am being thrown to the mirrors. I am--. I gasped. I am being pulled back to reality. I glanced up at Nora ...

Ok, so I thought I would do a critique on this... Although, I found nearly NO mistakes... (My critique is in BOLD within the quote.) The night closed down on ...

WOW!! :shock: I love it! I think that because it has some of your own style, it really adds to the colour and expresses your personality well. I really like ...

Thank you for those tips, sounds good. I'll start criting right away :) And yes, the weather has been good, but on the whole, the weathers not always like this, ...

Hello everyone of YWS! My name is Jess, 14 years old and live in England :D The weather' never very good, but it's pretty nice here (: My favourite colour ...