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Anna committed suicide. The images of Anna after that were all in Kira's head.

Also, it clearly has a deeper message than being afraid of heights. Poetry isn't always so simple.

I'm sorry that you think that my poems aren't good enough to add rhymes, but guess what? Not everyone is going to agree with your opinion. Thanks for the advertisement, ...

I hate to tell you this, but i haven't read LOTR yet. I've only read The Hobbit so far. I will read LOTR, though.

Thank you so much! Actually, i meant to make that line on "On The Tree" like you said it should be. I don't know what happened. Thank you for reviewing.

It isn't terrible! If you feel that you show rewrite it, than that is fine. I understand just getting things down. I hope that this doesn't sound rude, but sometimes ...

Oh... I really misunderstood your comment, as you can probably see. I'm really sorry. This is the internet, therefore, i cannot hear your tone of voice.

Am doing it. Present tense verbs ending in ing need a linking verb preceding them. Also, i was never saying that i was a great writer, so saying that i ...

Okay. Did you just leave a snarky comment for pleasure?

I honestly did not appreciate your comment. I told you that if you would get offended, you do not have to read it. Also, i didn't even criticize your work. ...

The "huge patch of one person talking" was the note. Also, please don't just call it confusing. I need to know exactly where it was confusing for me to improve ...

Yeah, i figured it out. Thank you, though!

Sorry for saying it, but honestly, you made me feel like my writing is terrible, and actually what you said is a lot worse than saying that it is terrible, ...

Also, is it really that difficult to find positives? This story is for the open minded, and you don't have to act like it is absolutely terrible just because it ...

The explanation is right there. Her sister commits suicide, and she is simply insane. Anna doesn't come back to life. Kira is merely insane. That is why no one else ...