rebelpilot

Thanks for the help. I have updated my story and I will keep what you said in mind when I am writing more story's. And yes this is star wars ...

Wow made me really appreciate not having to face what that guy has to face.That must be rough knowing that you had to shoot your own son.Wonderful bit of writing ...

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Wow made me really appreciate not having to face what that guy has to face.That must be rough knowing that you had to shoot your own son.Wonderful bit of writing ...