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Re: The FTL Chronicles - Chapter 1 to 3 (REVISED)
Hi sathalha. This is my review. First I just want to say that I am not familiar with FTL and I don't know what everything is. I really think this ...
Mar 27, 2017 -
Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 2 Part 2: A City of Faux Gold
Hello Jimss23. You said that you wanted reviews so here I am. Firstly I really think that you made it that the story wasn't to confusing. I fact even though ...
Feb 15, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Two
Ok this is my review. Firstly I really liked how you made it that everything wasn't perfect for them. I also thought that you described the characters feelings and their ...
Feb 1, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1-Chapter 3
Hello Jolley10101. This is my first review. Firstly I liked the way you described everything as it gave me enough information to picture what this world looks like but is ...
Jan 24, 2017