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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Finding the Wandering City

    Wow, I really enjoyed this and I haven't read much science fiction/fantasy. Emma is a really like-able character and I found it easy to relate to her. I love how ...

    Jun 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Aubade

    Wow, the image you set in this poem is very clear. I loved the imagery and the mood you placed. I could practically see their faces. I can't think of ...

    Jun 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Depth

    Enjeru, I really enjoyed your piece. Great use of words. I can see why you're a senior writer, but towards the end I became a little confused about what was ...

    Jun 27, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Astray (1)

    Hey there Cloggrabby, Great job! I think this is really good so far and I can't wait to read more. I didn't see much in error. The only thing I ...

    Jun 26, 2008


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