reaganpark

Wow, this is good! I like how you show how mean he is. Like instead of saying something like, "I am a terrible person," you describe all the people in ...

One of the things I like about this is the way the MC describes trying to understand math. It was easy to feel a connection to him, because I struggled ...

I like this. It's simple and gives enough info to understand what's happening, but in a way that's interesting. I think it was a cool idea to have them discussing ...

No one understands a librarian’s love for their books. It's simple, really; but unconditional. They feel that like people, books need to be cared for, treated well, and read often. ...

Hey, I posted the prologue of my story on here and I'd really appreciate a review. :D I got like two, and I changed it up a bit since then. ...

This is a pretty good story so far! I'm not really good at reviews, but here's a couple things I thought could make it better. This might just be me, ...

Thanks for the reviews, you guys! They really helped. It's nice for a change to have someone actually telling me what could make it better, instead of having my mom ...

This is a good story idea! I was hooked the whole time. I think it would make it better if you gave a little more background information, like talk about ...

Doors , That was one of the first things I remember thinking as a little girl. Lots and lots of doors. They were everywhere. In my house, at the store, ...

I got a kindle last Christmas, and it's the best gift I've ever received! Everyone says that reading on a computer screen gives them headaches. Well for me, reading on ...

I thought this was amazing. I've never thought of zombies as having personalities, being able to have conversations. It really changes my point of view. I like the part when ...

There aren't a lot of stories I've read about the relationship between brothers and sisters, so I think this was really interesting and fun to read. I liked how Chris ...

Wow. This is really good! I love how you used the color blue to express the way he was feeling. I like the end, where he realizes that blue doesn't ...

This was a good short story, and I enjoyed reading it. The descriptions were beautiful! It did seem a little more poetic at times, but I love poetry. I got ...