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Wow this is amazing! I really, really, really like it! I loved the twist where she sees her first kid! Omygoshthisisreallygood. please make a part three! I'm begging. :D I ...

I really liked this! I love your description of the dream. There were some parts that confused me, but that happens a lot in first chapters... I'm guessing it will ...

This was good! I really enjoyed reading it. I guess it was just your way of sayin' Life is just a grave in waitin'. I like these lines a lot, ...

I loved this! haha it made me laugh all the way through. I really agree with the shorts thing- it really annoys me to see girls walking around wearing stuff ...

Ok, first of all, I think this was really good. I love how she slides down the mountain in a watermelon. The image is just really funny in my head. ...

Whoa. Well, let me just say that I really liked this! It gave just enough information about Felicity to be mysterious, without giving the whole "I'm magical, blah blah" speech. ...

This is amazing! I was hooked from the beginning. I love the taps that you put between the sentences. Everything was really dramatic, and it had really strong emotions. I ...

This is a cool story. It was really powerful, it showed her emotions really well. They make everything "normal," but they leave you behind in the process. I really like ...

Wow, this is amazing! I was hooked from the very beginning. I loved the way you described everything- not giving a ton of details, but still giving enough important ones ...

I woke with a startled jolt. Glancing out the window at the slowly brightening darkness outside, I guessed it was around 5:45. I had been dreaming only moments before. It ...

and it was a two way street when it was only one I like this line a lot. It's simple but it explains things. These are good lyrics, but I ...

i really liked this poem! It was cute, and simple, showing the feelings of a little kid. The way you described frogs almost made me want to hold one. my ...

That's awesome! haha it's really cute. I don't really know what else to say... love the name! *alot* haha well... bye.

A thump in my chest, Which puts me off-guard - Throws me off-beat. I really like this, how simple it is but really deep at the same time. I also ...

I thought this was amazing! I was hooked the whole time. There weren't any boring parts, as far as I noticed. :D I loved your descriptions-I could clearly see what ...