reaganpark

Awesome! I love Petah, and how annoying he is. I can so see him in my head right now! :D I think you should add what Maria is thinking, when ...

Wow, this is really good! I love the idea. I was hooked the whole time, and never wanted to stop reading. Great job! I love how you have her reading ...

As I walked home, I thought about everything that I had to get done before Aunt Sarah got home. A small pit formed in my stomach as I imagined the ...

I was a little confused about what was happening at the beginning of this, but then most of it cleared up. I agree that you should switch the whole thing ...

Wow, this is good. It's really powerful and emotional- I love how you described everything. It really made me stop and think. I know someone already said it, but I ...

I really like this! It's cute and sweet, and it doesn't go on forever either. I don't really have any nitpicks, except that I agree that you should make it ...

This is really depressing! :( I liked it, though. I think it would be a lot better if you added paragraphs. It would make it easier to read, and easier ...

This is really good! I love the rhythm, and the wording. Everything was described really well- I could see it clearly in my head. This reminded me of the end ...

I really like the first three lines. I agree with the other reviewers in how you need more information, like when she actually starts feeling forced into it, and stuff ...

This was a good story, but I kept getting distracted by the paragraphs. They're really squished together, and there are some spots where you could separate one paragraph into two ...

This was a good story, but I kept getting distracted by the paragraphs. They're really squished together, and there are some spots where you could separate one paragraph into two ...

She didn't know that she was perfect on the outside,And no one else knew she was broken on the inside. I really like the ending lines.... this is a good ...

She didn't know that she was perfect on the outside,And no one else knew she was broken on the inside. I really like the ending lines.... this is a good ...

She didn't know that she was perfect on the outside,And no one else knew she was broken on the inside. I really like the ending lines.... this is a good ...

yeah, same here. I got one like a year ago, but I never get on it. It seems kinda pointless.