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Re: Keeper Chapter four
“This is ridiculous.” I muttered under my breath. The room Samuel had finally led me to wasn’t at all as cozy or relaxing as the other one. This one was ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
Hey! I LOVED these pictures. I know a bunch of people have already said it, but they're magical! :D I especially loved the first and fifth. Everything was so beautiful. ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Ugly
Wow, I really like this! It was really simple yet powerful. I love these lines: She was flawless to the eye What seemed to be a complex flower No one ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Lost, Chapter 1
Wow, I really liked this. I agree that you should go a little slower with the whole romantic thing, so it makes people keep reading. Also, don't make Angel seem ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
This was so sweet! (kinda what the other reviewer said, but whatever) I loved reading it. Especially your ending lines. There's nothing I really think you need to change- keep ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Other Reviewer. :)
Can you review all three chapters of my story, Keeper? Or just the third one if you don't want to spend that much time on it. Thanks!
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
Yeah... I've been working on it for a REALLY long time. I got pretty far into it, but then my computer crashed- I lost like thirty pages. :( It's about ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: You Found Me
This was awesome! It was really powerful and I could feel the love. At first I didn't think the ipod fit in with the rest, but then near the end ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Wither
Wow, this was awesome! I loved everything. The descriptions were really good- I could really clearly see everything happening. I agree that you need to resolve more things; I don't ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Starved
Wow, this is really good. I read it really fast because I wanted to know what happened at the end. WHAT HAPPENS?? AH! I HAVE TO KNOW! Sorry. This is ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The Chronicles of Bob
Wow, this was so awesome! I loved reading it, there weren't any parts that I didn't like. It was really fun to read; I love stories about crazy people. I ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Keeper Chapter three
That was my first dream of the strange glowing door, and it didn’t stop there. I continued to dream of it, almost every night. It almost became a routine to ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The Myth of Persephone
This is good! I enjoyed reading it. I love the way you describe her eating the pomegranate. I don't really have any nitpicks, unless they're the same as the reviewer ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sacrifice
First of all, I just want to say that this is really good. I love how intense it is from the very beginning, how it just jumps right into the ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Beware Unkown
Wow, this is good! It's mysterious and dark and... basically what the other reviewer said. :D Anyways, it's awesome! Sorry, but I have no nitpicks. I'm a terrible review, but ...
Jul 1, 2011
