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Sorry, this is going to be really short. But I just wanted to say that I loved this! I like how honest you were, and blunt about the way you ...

Wow, this is good! I was a little confused at the beginning, but as I read on I understood. I love how intense it is, how it starts out right ...

awesome shoes! I wish I had to patience to work on something like that for that long. Nice job! :D

OH MY GOSH! I just read through this whole thing, I would've reviewed something but I didn't want to stop. This is sooo good! I love how you go back ...

Because I always have a story in my head that's begging to get out!

This is good, and I agree that you could turn it into a novel. It feels like it's missing a lot of information, which might be easier to add if ...

Awesome pictures! I love the one with the dripping faucet. I'm sorry, but this is going to be really short because there's nothing I think you should fix. :)

Nice job! I really liked this. The idea is cool and I like where you put your line breaks. I agree that grammar is your only problem, but it's not ...

The first name that popped into my head was Jennifer. You know, like 'Jenny'. I don't know why, but that's the first one I'd suggest. Also maybe Cassie, Madison (did ...

The warm sun on my face woke me up. Sighing in content, I rolled over and stretched. No fragments of memory this morning- my night had been peaceful and dreamless ...

The whole walk home, I worried about what Aunt Sarah would say. Would she have even noticed that I was missing? Shivering in the cold, I suddenly remembered Jonah. “Oh…” ...

Wow, this is good. It really made me think about independence day and what it's about. I love fireworks, but you're making me rethink them! :( Awesome poem- I loved ...

Growth, change, strength, beauty All of which I no longer grasp A pill containing the reality I fear Passes my lips, kills all my hope Leaves mere memories to mourn ...

Hey, I like this! It's really strong. I can feel how sad he his- it kinda makes me feel depressed... :D great job! I don't really have anything that I ...

This is awesome! It was really interesting to read the whole time through- I never really got bored or confused. I love the ending, and basically the whole thing. :D ...