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  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)

    This is awesome! I was laughing basically the whole time. When I wasn't, I was smiling because I knew that I was going to laugh again soon. There's nothing I ...

    Aug 16, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    This awesome story was so awesome that I can't stop thinking about how awesome it was! Literally, awesomeness just exploded out of the computer screen the whole time I was ...

    Aug 16, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Hell's Rollercoaster

    Oh my gosh, I love this! It's scary and really funny at the same time. I love how you make the reader feel condemned and yet make it exciting, almost ...

    Aug 11, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Maybe Someday.

    These are so cute! I love those little statues. I used to have one of my own.. and then.. let's just say it wouldn't make a good picture. :D I ...

    Aug 3, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Darren Criss - a portrait!

    Hi! I think this is really good! I don't know much about drawing, but I love his eyes and his hair. The arm seemed bent in a weird sorta way, ...

    Aug 3, 2011


  • People tell me this one all the time: READ! ALL THE TIME! ... Well, not that much. But the more you read, the easier it is to figure out how ...

    Aug 2, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Solitary

    This is good! I don't normally read a lot of poetry, but your title drew me in. :D I love how simple this is, yet powerful and filled with emotion. ...

    Aug 2, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Rescue Romance

    Haha this is so cute! I don't know much about art or anything, so I don't know what to say. But I think you did a good job. It made ...

    Aug 1, 2011

  • Romantic Novels
    Re: Scars: Part 5

    Wow, this is really good! I literally almost cried at the end! I have no nitpicks, since I don't like doing grammar. Great job, and now I'm going to go ...

    Aug 1, 2011


  • Hey, This is amazing! I love the way you described everything. It was like I could see it happening in my head. I was kinda confused at the beginning, at ...

    Aug 1, 2011

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Keeper chapter 7

    “Do you think we should bring anything?” I asked Jonah. We were back at the house, getting ready to leave; I grabbed my backpack while Jonah thought. “Probably, just to ...

    Aug 1, 2011

  • General Articles
    Re: deleting from forums

    Oh my gosh! I love this!!!!!!!! I was laughing through the whole thing. This makes me want to plan my own Gatorade fight. If your boyfriend never wears anything but ...

    Jul 31, 2011


  • Hi! I just want to say that I think this is really good! I love this sentence: I dance in the park when people are watching (fine, attempt to). But ...

    Jul 31, 2011


  • Wow, I really like this! I love how you show that it affected you, and how you and your family enjoyed it together. I laughed when I read this, I ...

    Jul 31, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: No longer a poem!

    I love this poem! It's short and yet so full of emotion. I especially love the first line, and the ending. This is really good! You are obviously talented at ...

    Jul 25, 2011


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri