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Alright, I completely understand your point. However, this is just a fictional story. Perhaps, if it played out on a different planet, with aspects so unlike our own world, the ...

Your map is fairly accurate. I forgot to mention, and had to look back in my writing to find this small detail, that Svetzar's section of France extends all the ...

Thanks Rosey! I understand my excerpt didn't exactly make since. I was just talking about the politics, not about how this girl knows so much, and what in the world ...

I wrote a novel about two years ago. I'm just now sending it into the editor, who is also my mom. We have strong political views in my family, which ...

Yes, it does! Thanks! I'm reading "Eragon" (by Christopher Paolini) right now, and now that I think about it, I do notice how the fight sequences are. Short, sweet, and ...

Rosey and Blink: Thank you so very much for answering my question. I had determined my initial error already, I just wasn't sure what was making it sound so terrible. ...

Hey everyone! Just starting a new novel. It's a twist on the story of Beauty and the Beast. I really like to be descriptive. I mean, when J.R.R. Tolkien is ...