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razzleberryx

  • Other Poetry Re: Passion

    Thanks so much to all of you! Your reviews mean a lot to me and hopefully I'll be able to incorporate all that you've said in my future writing :] ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Intrigue

    It's been a while since I've posted...or even been on YWS. But I wanted to share this, so here it is: Please tell me I’m not alone, On my own, ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One Night Stand

    Wow, yeah I definitely have to add how much I like this. It's so emotional without being whiny and superficial. It's just great! Nice work!

    Jul 8, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi :]

    Hahaha thanks :]

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Second Emotions

    I love how real and truthful this poem is. It's written very well and the word choice and rhythm are amazing. But I do think that punctuation may make it ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    Hey! I only have one post up right now, but you should review it :) It's the first poem I've written in a while, so all critique is very much ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Inflicted

    All I can think right now is that that is some great imagery. I saw the whole thing play out in my mind in great detail, and it takes a ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Passion

    Hey, so this is my first official post on YWS! Yay! I write a lot of poetry, and this is the most recent I've written (after a long absence from ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Library Love Games

    You've got some really detailed reviews, but I just wanted to add how much I love this because it seems so different. The style and the voice are just a ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Inspiration?

    I'm really into writing poetry, it's actually the main thing I write. I usually find one of the best sources of inspiration are situations and happenings around you. Any problems, ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi :]

    Thanks so much all of you :] I feel so welcomed here and it's great :] Like I said I'm thrilled to be back and start posting, and even more ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi :]

    Hey everyone! I'm somewhat new to YWS. I had an account about 4 years ago, but I forgot what it was. But here I am again, better than ever! I've ...

    Jul 3, 2010


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"