rayofhope

It made a very interesting was unpredictable and interesting.The story was different and i would definitely wait for the next chapter too. :) The choice of words was great.i liked ...

It was really kept me hooked from the beginning till the end.I liked the ending best.Your spelling and grammar was also great.good luck. :)

You win some, You lose some, Don't take it to heart, Its just the start, Life is tough, Worse than a cough, Not at all easy, Might make you feel ...

I loved this story. It was so much fun.The best part was that while reading it I didnt lose interest till the end.And I even wished that the story was ...

This is a really touching poem. The choice of words is also good.I really liked it and it seems to have been written with a lot of feeling.

The whole world created was beautiful and the descriptions were favorite parts were the ones about being unladylike and not liking wearing dresses.The one part i didn't quite understand was ...

Peace in this world, Hearts full of love, Is what i wish to see. This world of hate, Of war and fate, Is not supposed to be. If i hate ...