raynelullaby

I really liked that. It rhymed well, and really made me think. I can definitely relate to that. I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I was glad it was ...

sooo this is only my second poem I've submitted, I know it needs a lot of work, and a better ending, but I like how it's going so far. Constructive ...

I certainly liked your style, it was different from what I'm used to reading. Some of the lines confuse me however. Are you going through the seasons? Because I was ...

I think you should add to it, I find it just ended a bit abruptly. Maybe clean it up a bit, by adding more detail and paying close attention to ...

I liked it! It was interesting, and I like some of the other readers found myself going back and reading it. Other than the spelling mistake that has already been ...

Oh, thanks for pointing that typo out for me! Yes, I realize that love poems are the most common probably out of the history of writing, I'll try my best ...

I'm new to this site so I thought I would post my newest poem : ) I know I have a lot to learn haha. You’re a packaged deal I’m ...