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Lol, yes, this is the third comment I've gotten on the imagery/scenery. There's a lot more of it later on in the story because it's built up to and plays ...

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Thank you very much for your detailed review. ^_^ My intention was to add more info about the description as the story progresses. Especially since a lot of the places ...

Thank YOU for taking the time to read and review this. ^_^ I'm not certain to what specifically you are referring to with "descriptions". If you're talking about world building, ...

I'm personally more of a villain fan too (though, I prefer villains like Keaton's Vulture over Hiddleston's Loki). But it's mostly because of the complexity of most villain characters. Most ...

Aww, sorry to hear that. :[ I'm not certain what advice to give about the length of your reply. However, for preventing you from losing what you write online, I'd ...

Sorry, I was away from my computer for a few days. But it's been a delight to discuss your story with you. ^_^ What's my personal and honest thought? Pretty ...

No worries about the late replies. As you can see, I'm not so punctual myself D'X But thank you for taking the time to explain the situation. :] And I ...

Hello, sorry for the late reply to your reply! ^_^ Thanks for taking the time for considering my feedback and making edits based off of them. :D 1.) I'll leave ...

I definitely agree with your stance on setting. I just generally classify what you mentioned as a "need-to-know" sort of thing. xD Atmosphere and tone is also important. :]

Hello one last time. :] Lol. Yes, the crying line is supposed to be an exaggeration. It's meant to help plant seeds of doubt toward Niall as a trustworthy narrator. ...

Hello again. Thank you for toughing it out for the second part of this chapter. ^_^b The name is 'Lucrecia', but it sounds like 'Loo-cray-shia'. Yeah, for some reason, I ...

Hello one last time. It's Lucrecia. For some reason, I accidentally interchange the names a lot. I'm guessing because the "e" in real life sounds like an "a"? In hindsight, ...

Hello, sorry for the late reply. >.< I'll consider your stance on the beginning of this chapter. Thank you for giving me your point of view on how you interpreted ...

Hello again. :D I can certainly reconsider an alternative starting-sentence. :] Thank you so much for providing your feedback on the introductory portion as some one who has read the ...