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I really liked the was really emotional and touching.the emotions are very well-expresed through the poem.you have a great potential.But I also agree with would have been better if you ...

I quite agree with papernessa.the tone of the poem was good.but i didn't quite get what you are actually going to convey through the poem and you definitely need to ...

Well, it was indeed a good piece of work…………………I experienced the emotions that you tried to point out while reading it………………..moreover it was a very good and uncommon topic â

Whenever I feel sad, depressed and left out, And my loneliness prompts me to huddle up in my couch and shout; I softly shut up my tired eyes , And ...

it was really a good poem...............but the line- "North Korean sneeze champions" didn't match with the whole poem................i wish u could put some other word in that place or exclude ...

i really liked the was a fun to go through it.........................i have never read such poem before.......keep writing more.........

it was a good try all over..............i'll advice you u pay a bit heed to your rhyming scheme........... the line-"the sun send sparkling light on the sea" -can be better ...

the poem is really gr8!!!!!!!!! at your age,writing poems with such emotions is really a sign of a good poetess.......carry on with your writing...............i'm looking forward to some more works ...

Life is a steep slope, life is a plain; Life has sunny days, life has rain; Sometimes I think that life is a notebook, Where hundreds of stories are scribbled; ...

it was realy a good poem.....................i liked the content and the thought u put forward..................

hi GracieBee, it was a very gud thought............i liked it very much

One evening as I was going out for the party, I planned the best dress to put; The best jewels to wear, In order to look the best I could. ...