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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Grahams

    The Grahams Mr and Mrs Graham sit on the big green couch in the lounge. Their faces flicker in the television’s sterile glow. Mr Graham sits with one leg crossed ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Nightmare Man

    the nightmare man I get back home to find a long white man in my kitchen. I ask him who he is And what he is doing there. The long ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Dark Goddess [1]

    Hello, just to say that I liked this version a lot more than the previous one, it was more exciting and less... cheesy. I liked the start, especially the bit ...

    Jul 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Fat Burbies

    the fat burbies Daddy was out when I saw the burbies through the kitchen window. Burbies is short for suburbans and it’s the word me and Daddy use for anyone ...

    Jul 27, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Dark Goddess (title pending)

    I liked this, although I agree with some other reviewers about the 'aye' and walking the plank clichés. I also thought the exclamation marks sort of spoilt the flow a ...

    Jul 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: What's On Television?

    I loved this! This was easily the best - and most bizarre - story that I've read on this site so far... Did you completely make up all of the ...

    Jul 26, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sky Dance

    sky dance I start at Red . The sky here is blasted and cloudless and the ground blisters my naked feet. A man wades through the distorted air and picks ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Lonely Girl

    the lonely girl The water is cool. Gareth pushes himself through the cool blue water. Pushes himself through the water with sure hard strokes. The sun sends threads of white ...

    Jul 22, 2008


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