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Dreaming of Flying, gliding The wind rushing past Darkness all around Lit by the stars Dreaming of Flickering, dancing Bright orange flames Devouring all Nothing the same Dreaming of Good ...

Hi this seemed like more of a story than a poem but it was good and i liked the images. as i read along i expected a dramatic ending with ...

I'm sorry but i can't say i liked this. it's just a personal thing, i'm not a big fan of the narrator talking to the reader. eg: How about you? ...

hi this wasn't too much of an info dump, but if you're worried about it maybe you could make some of the information into a news paper article thats lying ...

haha! I really loved this, it was cool. My best friend is a snowman. I made him just last night. With a hat and carrot nose, that suit him just ...

i wish there was a 'love' button next to the 'like' one 'cos i would totally click it. this was awesome. there aren't words to describe its beauty, or maybe ...

beautiful peice you have here, just wonderful Just trying to forget But it's not that easy That's something people don't get The things i think it would be better if ...

The sun shone down warmly on a quiet summer’s day. The only presence in the silent streets was a fat tabby cat lying in a flowerbed, basking in the sunlight ...

i like the way you repeated 'black hair, black clothes' through out the poem. when most people try that it sounds bad, but this flowed nicely. what i don't understand ...

i agree with fighta but i dont think that the rhyme in the first poem sounded forced, i think it flowed quite nicely. Face burnt beyond any hope of being ...

"I value my Gram." I think you meant gran Why valentines day? why not something closer to New year to make it make more sense? Overall it was good and ...

3 Sabre “You coming to the shops, Jas?” Caleb asked Jason as they allowed the buzzing throng of students to push them out of the school gate. Caleb was talking ...

I couldn’t tell you when it happened. Maybe it was when my parents decided they where (were, not where) going to “take a little break”. Maybe it was when my ...

2 High School South Pine High. This was Jason Blake’s school now. As Jason entered through the main gate he instantly felt trapped and dread and uncertainty washed through him. ...

1 South Pine Village South Pine Village was built in an extensive, isolated valley reached only by the motorway that ran parallel to the mountain range. The large, modern village ...