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  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows - Chapter Six

    Three o'clock home time didn't come fast enough. The afternoon sunlight bathed the golden bricked path beneath her in orange light and warmed Lilly’s cheeks. Her heavy navy-blue skirt fluttered ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter Five - Lies)

    Through the glass wall, the car park sparkled from recent rain though the sky was void of clouds, stretching on endlessly. A million billion stars winked down on the family ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter Five - Lies)

    Through the glass wall, the car park sparkled from recent rain though the sky was void of clouds, stretching on endlessly. A million billion stars winked down on the family ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter 4 - Surrender)

    As the clouds skated away to reveal a patch of blue sky and sun, the dew dampening the grass began to evaporate, spreading a thin fog across the yard. Lilly ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter 2 - Broken Wings)

    Chapter Two – Broken Wings Come nightfall the essentials were unpacked, the rest of the boxes stored in their appropriate room according to their contents. Having not had the power ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter 1 - Blood Sisters)

    Chapter One – Blood Sisters The wooden panelled room stretched on and on into the distance, into the darkness. Dust floated in the shafts of sunlight pouring through the grimy, ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Living Shadows (Chapter 3 - Goodbye)

    Eight years later… Gravel crunched under the worn soles of the girls black converses as she trudged sulkily across the car park. The suns warmth was kept at bay by ...

    Jun 22, 2011
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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Together? No.

    i liked it! it had powerful emotions and nice imagery and makes the reader use their imagination and really gets them thinking Rushing streams wake my subconscious from it's colorful ...

    Jan 12, 2011
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  • Other Poetry Re: life

    thanks for your reviews :) Standing strong so we don’t fall Learning to rise above it all I think this line and the one above are out of place.. Especially ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: life

    Life goes on, as do we Losing, gaining family Friends, enemies, often they blend Nothings the same from start to end Learning’s constant, changes nigh From when we’re born to ...

    Aug 10, 2010


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— Helen Keller