random.thoughts

Hello! It's great to see what a passion you have for writing. That sounds so amazing! I'm currently in a writer's block. Good timing, no? Anyways, remember to read the ...

Well Haruno Sakura hit it pretty hard with the grammar, so I’m going to go more on content. But one little thing first, I believe you are suppose to have ...

Nope. It still has some of the products from the party yesterday! Go passing out without taking a shower! TPBM hates the dentist?

Hello Meg! I'm new to this too, so I understand how getting started can be kind of confusing! But what the other members said was true, everyone really is nice ...

Hello! I know, I'm a "writer" but I really can't write this essay very well. I was wondering if someone would mind helping me find some quotes, or pointing out ...

Hello! I'm new here too!! So how did you find out about the site? A friend showed me! What type of things do you write? And isn't the entire thing ...

Ok, the first one is easier then it seems! I'm going to do a general overview of the problem and if you need it more in dept then just PM ...

In your first poem, here are my comments on lines: Over your body.

Hello WaterYper! I actually have already posted something in the other fiction area, so we will see if anyone reviews that! And you could have answered the question from before ...

Night Mistress- Hello! It's great to meet you! What type of literature do you write? G-Dog- Nah, I'm just kidding! I'll make up a good nickname! Since I am not ...

It was a snapshot of life. It portrayed all the happiness, all the carefree a smile could. The problem was it was only one second. One second does not, could ...

Hello to you as well! I'm not a big fan of twilight myself, but I have friends that are so I can't say anything that bad. Plus, it was one ...

Hello, before I begin there is just something I have to get off my chest. I have a little pet-peeve about people not capitalizing the letter “I” and you seem ...

Hello there! Thought I would offer up some critique! Let’s start with word choice and grammar. An ordinary person Yes, Like the fact that Like I have told you already. ...

Hello there! I was scared no one would come! Thank you for the information about points! That makes it all much clear. Anyways, I love writing mystery, romance, and the ...