ralfieobubbles

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Hello there, I liked the concept behind your poem - simple, straight-forward and relating to everyday things. The emotions are quite powerful as well. It's just the grammatical side of ...

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Hi, I'm Ralfieobubbles and I shall be your reviewer today :) A very deep and in depth poem simply crammed with all the goodies of the poetic language. I think ...

Hi, thanks for the review :) Actually, this story is based on my grandfather's escape when he was a child and this really did happen. The blade is I suppose, ...

Hi Alex, thanks for the feedback - comments are always very useful. I'll look into those things :)