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The para's have been spaced out now. :D

I really like Lightning Bug- Its an australian writing site with great resources

Ding! My toast pops out of the toaster. I spread some butter on it, then walk outside. Already there is a dark spot in the sky. Other than that, however, ...

The first few lines hit me and then the rest of the poem just comes naturally. I think being a poet is something that you either are or arent, and ...

Bouncing through the hallways and skipping down the street. Talking, giggling, and greeting, a radiant smile on her face she glows with life's excitement. Behind the shining girl, three friends, ...

I think that your poem might flow better if punctuation was changed- e.g.-Summer danced ; the sun beamed down On the grassy plain . Along the stream she went With ...

The abstract imagery is really really cliche. In the first stanza I liked the finality of: My fear, my anger. My fault. , but I think that the poem should ...

This is really confusing- it has a sort of mystery to it. I love it! This is the type of poem that can be interpreted a million different ways and ...

I like the gist of the poem, and have written many poems of a similar nature on the borders of my math homework, however, I find the stanza They whine ...

Hi! I'm new to this site. :D