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Re: Random.
Hahah i really want to eat that piec of bread... it looks delicous!! :D hahah and adorable...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Midday Meditation
Hahah I love how many people are somenting on my picture and saying they love it. Makes me feel cool :P
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Opening Night
Oh i love this! The way you dercibe your emotions is great. Also im glad you didnt try to make this rhyme, like alot of people try to do, because ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: This Love
This poem really makes me think.. About how we reguard love.. I think that you did a very original way to show that. good job :)
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: cheating
I think this is really interesting.. You dont punctuate any of your conjuctions, which you really should do because it seems sloppy and childish when it's ive, rather than I've, ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Killing myself
Thank you everyone for the comments! I wrote this poem this morning, then realized it was almost review so i hurried so i could make the cut, so I apologoze ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Killing myself
"You coward" I scream. "Just take it all away!" "I wish i could! But i just dont think i can take the pain. The knife i hold inside my hand, ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Dear Humans,
Hahahah i reallly like this post. it made me laugh. but what exactly do you mean by appt? just curious. you could have started it better but overall great piece ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Midday Meditation
WHOOOOO!! thats me :D
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Fake Date (4)
Hey, this is cute but just wondering how is july using david for money?
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Jack
Hey so I really enjoyed the story great job. i just ave some questions. Does Jacks father kill Chris Chambers, Gordie LaChance, Vern Tessio, and Teddy DuChamp as well as ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: When you drop your tampon in front of your boss
bahahahha i loved it. dont real;y have good critisizim, cuz your a much better writer than me, but i just wanted to let you know that it made my day ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: As I Close My Eyes
its very interesting. i enjoy the whole theme of anit_conformitism. Their Lord merciful and never once did I think he'd smite, "definitely not". what exactly do you mean by def ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Dear god, I killed my husband
haha i loved it! few things. i think mabey if you somehow had the signs in there, but very unoticable, it would be cool. also you misplelt feel (fell) in ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: I need help.
Friends. The less i try, the more i cry. Yet i cant stop, even though crying is for suckers. The sorrow? The pain? It surronds me, Engulfs me. My heart ...
Jul 23, 2010
