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Gosh, no wonder you won. This piece is excellent and I think you deserved that prize. This was a short and sweet little piece, with brilliant description and imagery. I ...

I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to hear more, which is a surprise since I'm not really into stories like this. One thing that did bug me was ...

Wow! I love the twist at the end and how it's not completely lovey-dovey. What's going to happen to the kids?! Please PM me when the next part is out. ...

Aww, I actually quite like some of these ideas! 'Your story begins with a quiet child genius in a bazaar. The villain is a gunfighter with a sense of humor ...

On the contrary, I enjoyed it. I was given a clear idea of what was going on from the beginning. There's one thing I will say, and that's to pace ...

An igloo in a snowy plain with icicles hanging from the doorway and a small, porcelain blonde woman in a white, fluffy coat.

-You know you're a writer when people ask to watch you type because you do it so quickly without looking at the keyboard. -You know you're a writer when you're ...

I really love the style of verse you've used here and some of the description, but the only problem I have with it is that it doesn't come to a ...

This is a site where 'the query shark' goes over query letters and brutally savages them. XDD Well, points out exactly what's wrong with them and whether a publisher would ...

I have decided to review your story, which I enjoy very much, but there were a few things I found with this that I decided to point out to you ...

Please don't switch tenses! You flitted from present to past tense and I wasn't sure if that was intentional or not. Not only did I do horrendous, Not only did ...

The wind whipped at my hair like an angry beast, whispering dark secrets into my ears. The street was empty; the sky overcast. The papers that had rattled free from ...

With narrative poetry, similar rules apply as to prose. You need to show rather than tell because otherwise we feel no empathy for the character in question. So, if you ...

I don't think he was a paedophile. I'm sad that he's dead because he was about to make this big comeback and one of my friends was going to see ...

I hadn't heard about it until a couple of months ago, but I'm definitely going for it this year! Bring it on. (: