ragtime08

Forget Me Not “Never say goodbye because goodbye means going away and going away means forgetting.” -Peter Pan Clocks ticked away, her head felt as though it had been tossed ...

I really like the suspense and mystery you've created in this prologue. Especially the ending: I tried to run but the arrow was faster than me and then I fall ...

Preface I had always felt like luck was working against me, like I didn’t belong. Every time life finally felt right, something that was completely out of my control happened. ...

This is an extremely creative and engaging story. your descriptions are very good.

They say I walk around with experience; like I just give off an aura that says “I know this. I’ve already been there.” Perhaps they have a point. Sometimes I ...